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Thursday 11 December 2014

Glowing animal

Characters:
David, Hannah, Fluffy (the dog), Mum, Jacob, Teacher
Supporting Character:
Jacob because he saved the glowing animal from being run away.

Story:
There once lived 2 siblings in Scotland in the countryside. Their names were David and Hannah. After their mother dropped them off to school, they were on their way to the school until something glowed on the side of the school. Their dog, Fluffy, was terrified because something was glowing. Hannah was trying her best to stop Fluffy hesitating. Instead, he was out of control, and ran back home. David and Hannah were really astonished when they saw the glowing thing. They took a closer look to see what it was. Finally, David asked “What do you think it is Hannah?” Hannah wasn't speaking at all because she couldn't take her eyes of the glowing thing. Suddenly, a sound that sounded like tiger was heard above the bushes. David and Hannah jumped with shock. They couldn't speak nor move. They moved 3 steps back and ran off to go back to school.Screenshot 2014-11-27 at 09.39.34.png

When they entered, the teacher looked at them with horror. “What were you doing this whole time?! I thought you would  didn't come earlier than the time it is now!” said the teacher. David and Hannah just stared at each other with fear. David replied “We’re sorry Miss Lee. We were a bit lost on the road.” David and Hannah wouldn't tell the truth because they didn't want anyone to know.  After the bell rang, their good friend, Jacob came over to say hello. David and Hannah were out of words because they couldn't explain what they saw earlier today. Jacob looked at their faces and realized that their faces were red. Jacob asked “Why are your faces red?”. “We… just went to….. a farm. Yeah, a farm.” Hannah replied. David was sick of this blabbering Hannah was talking about. So David explained what the real story was to Jacob. Jacob wasn't doubting about this situation because he knew the 2 siblings wouldn't tell a lie. To show proof to Jacob, the kids showed Jacob where the place was and Jacob was amazed. He was out of words to be.

Lazy me

Lazy me
The alarm rang and it was already morning. It was a cold morning, and his toes were getting cold. He was shivering and cold. When he felt that he was cold he went back to bed and then he pretended to cover himself. He called his mum to come and help him. When his mum didn’t help him, “he said please help me,  please do” and then his dad ran inside his room, took the blanket off from him and said get up and get changed. When the boy  finished dressing, he went to school. He was really late and so he got into big trouble.